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Poem Number 857
hello lothario
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what makes it so easy for you
the sheild that protects you
is a warm place to put your sword
while you take sniper shots
from your comfortable nest
image yourself equal to the task
of living in the open -
you cannot hide from yourself
by breaking the mirror
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so very clever of you
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