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Poem Number 846
Time Heals?
As does the sun set
to be eclipsed
appreciated after the next


Commentary:
When Winter comes
And birds fly south
And the whiskers whiten
Around my mouth,
Will you still come to me and cling,
The way you clung when it was Spring?
Or, will time wear the passion out
And will our hearts forget about
The way we felt when love was new,
Just you for me and me for you?

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Time heals :)
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Very nice.
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very slow
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Healing can feel as if it is taking forever.
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time's up :)
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If time is up,
then what is down?
does it go straight?
or in the round?
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gravity for ground
it's never late
faster than sound
no longer bankrupt
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Sweetness :)
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