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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four


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Poem Number 833
The sun still glowed on the mountain top
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While the valley in shadow lay
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When I came to the edge of the river
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At the end of a lonely day
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And I paused to reflect on the weary miles
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I had travelled along the way
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In the East the first star twinkled
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And I made a wish so true
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That by the end of another day
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I would be again with you
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Commentary:
nice :)
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I enjoyed this, Thanks for sharing
---RJ
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Thank you both. I love to "tinker" with words to try to get them to come out right. You win some and you lose some. Where are all the poets that used to post here? Glad to see you're still here, RJ.
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