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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 823
Walk away ....
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Saw you lying on the track
Blew a kiss and never looked back
Wish I could have held you to me
Healed all that pain with soft lips
Wish we could have remained
Beautiful with pretty scars
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This is pretty bad don't you think?
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it's bad by design. this is THE salon for semi serious persons.
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