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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 817
5 minutes of writing
Commentary:
you sit
with your thumb up your ass
and 7 tom collins down your throat
and wonder
why
the phone doesn't ring
why
your belly growls
and your bathtub
always has a shiny
glaze
-------
better than a black ring
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