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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 816
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Commentary:
headache
stabbing
piercing
crashing
bursting
frikin headache
kicking my ass
i cant see
i cant think
i cant write poetry
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um...i like the last line the best--eric--
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