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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four


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Poem Number 814
5 minute writing practice


Commentary:
you hope
somewhere deep inside
that there is a
someone

you dream
in the deepest night
that that someone
will seek you

you seek
in the eyes of strangers
that twinkle of
soulmate

you wish
he would find you
he would love you
forever


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