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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 811
5 MINUTE WRITING PRACTICE
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you
through a blue moon
have eyes
that terrorize my soul;
you stare down
my spine
eager to consume
me; your sneer
haunts my sleep
and i wake
knowing the nightmare
is worse
when i'm awake.
mj
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