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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 810
5 minute writing practice
Commentary:
a bare breast
not for an infant to suckle
exposed
for your pleasure
to jostle and handle
as roughly
as tenderly
as you wish
you
own
me
and the baby
well
it just cries
in the other room
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