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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Three
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Poem Number 817
if i think loud enough, will you hear?
all these thoughts of wanting you trapped inside
how nice if my trapped thoughts heard
were the same as yours
and we could speak as one
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although, then we might get confused and not realize we were hearing each other's thoughts becuz those thoughts are the very same ones we were already thinking and then... lol
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lol(too)
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thanks for enjoying ... lol :)
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