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Poem Number 783
Adam
Commentary:
I realized I could get out with my life
So I compromised
So I said, “Fuck this shit,
What do ya want?”
They looked like I just messed up bad
I says “what…you gonna let me walk?”
They look like I don’t even speak fucking English
I walk toward the door like it was nothing
Can’t a guy walk out?
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