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Poem Number 777
Religions Religions as thick as the pigeons
that alit on vatcan square
judaism, catholicism,mormonism,masonism
Iam sure there is one for every bird
that ever has alit there
Instructions,Instructions on how to be
as well as who to be for
like pieces of wood to be burned in the fire
not knowing what fate has in store
Pitiful Pitiful as they are put away
in silence and darkness in the grave!
Commentary:
line 2 should read that alit on vatican square (ANN , You should allow for line corrections once posted,and by some means only by the author)ljd
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line 11 completes this poem! ljd
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