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Poem Number 761
Dark Plum
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Dyed by sunset
Surrounded by recent ripples
Of twisted white
One leg bent
Half an invitation?
The knee lava orange
Your left side stretched
Towards the window
Stained glass breast
But my eyes are fixed
On your sacred mound
Emerging from shadow
With the last gasping light
Smooth flesh is highlighted
A moist dark plum
_______________________________________________________rvenghost
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Gorgeous work. You excel :)
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You write so intense. Your words ,incredible.I am in awe of you and the way you express yourself. Havent been around lately. Thanks for the motivation.......DRQ
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