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Poem Number 759
No Regrets


Commentary:
I can feel your want
your need
your heat
It cascades off you in waves
a visual moan
the way your muscles moves
as if
I'm already in you

your whole body is dressed
wrapped to entice
all my fetishes
laced and gartered and strapped

a high note
almost beyond hearing
rings in my head
as I watch you
slowly
deliberately
hike
your skirt
up

the garden of eden
and your apple
polished and ripe
there
smiling
waiting
to be devoured

and I drink in your sin
like a mornings tea
with no thought of retribution or karma
for this
this wet embracing gift
this sharing of souls
this becoming one with god
how can this
be a sin?

and I surrender my soul
my future lives
my eternity
my nirvana
for one day
in your embrace

and I have
no regrets
-------------------------------------rvenghost

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This awakens old memories. Well spoken.
...BR
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"a visual moan" - incredible!

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