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Poem Number 758
.. dating buddha ..
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"Thanks sweetie, you're great!"
It's nothing, said the Buddha.
"But to me, it's everything baby."
At that he laughed uproariously
A belly laugh that shook the forest
Got the trees and grass giggling, too.
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even I, then chuckled in the wind
but the sound of my laughter only blew downstream
leaving me to mime my joy
to the evergreens
*mm*
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(: wonderful :)
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