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Poem Number 754
The Unified Unwhole
Commentary:
The Unified Unwhole
A Congress of Apologists Utter
Heraldic visions
Atonal harmonies of religious
vagaries
Heresy, Yahweh's umbilicus is
dangling
[An unseemly sight]
How women willfully drown
themselves in the sea
To escape the Midwives merciless
murder
To escape Eve's stretch marks
And a Genesis ex libris tattooed
with heavenly flourish
Across Lilith's gorgeous white
ass.
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