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Poem Number 1739
perfection unattainable
---Anonymous
will remain so until
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Poem Number 1740
CYCLES
---LSY
Born in the Spring in the warmth of sunlight,
---LSY
a crimson leaf now topples from a tree
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in the frosty breeze of an Autumn day.
---LSY
It will wither and decompose to dust.
---LSY
The parallel to human existence coincidental.
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A body born from the warmth of the womb
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will mature to a useless state,
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become shriveled and worn with decaying mind.
---LSY
Reverting to the earth from which it came.
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This is a poem,not a bunch of garbage. Keep up the good work
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