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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Two


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Poem Number 1636
"Daydreaming"
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Sexy little pixie dancing through my dreams
Unraveling my reality from it’s poorly woven seams
And she seems to smile when she decides to tease
Taking great pleasure in bringing me to my knees
I follow every graceful movement of her delicate frame
I’m content with the thought that I’ll never be the same
She is a gift
She is a blessing
She is the dream
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J.L. Law


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Are you talking about your Carmen Marie? How have have you been?.........g-rae
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