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Poem Number 3178
let's be normal


Commentary:
hey, be in love with me.
yeah, fall in love with me.
let's hold hands and walk through the village.
let's permagrin sidelong when i fall into your eyelashes.
.
you know i'm beautiful
you think i've got it goin on
you know i'm just shy so i don't talk much
otherwise i'd already have someone, yeah that's it
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let's hold out for forever
let's pretend you and i can be sublime
let's conceive a forest of emotions
and deliver our ideas tossed in slime.
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that would be real which is unreal
let's do the fantastic tango.
i'm enjoying walking around in sunglasses at night
because pain feels good and you can't tell me differently.
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---z
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