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Poem Number 18628
speeding up the bullshit between relationships


Commentary:
i find myself doing the same shit as before. nothing is that different. just more 'teachings' i should employ in future interactions.

an ex-girlfriend emailed out of the blue, saying she'd been listening to 'ghostland observatory', and i simply popped into her head.

what the fuck does that mean?

i asked her for her phone number (so that i could play the dimitri message into her voicemail).

/wc
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lol! show some mercy to her. i dreamt of an old boyfriend the other night and when i got my morning emails there he was. stuff like that happens all the time.

also, after the dimitri stuff here, i was told the next day by a suitor that my writing is "elegant" - that was weird!

janet
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he must truly see you for what you are. /wc
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do you mean that in a creepy way? now i don't know if he's to be trusted.
janet
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/wc is morphing into dimitri - N
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no. he is merely reabsorbing, like the t-1000 (since we're discussing schwarzenegger domain shit), a part of him that has fulfilled its purpose.

/wc
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that memetic poly-alloy is good for making sharp knives and stabbing weapons...- N
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yes. and simple tools like dimitri :) /wc
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yes - perfect. - N
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