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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Five


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Poem Number 689
She falls away
grasping
for the hands of her angel
She's risking failure
quickly
he reaches out and takes hold
She's in love
deeply
her heart will love no other
With tears falling
trust
is nothing but a past thought
Angel of love
forever
will heal her lost reborn soul
Poor dear


Commentary:
Lines 1-9 are mine. I'd be interested to see the 3-1-6 pattern continue.
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fear
plummets through air to be defined
updraft or shear
gravity
brings it all back to earth

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