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Poem Number 403
a blue shuffle scuffed a dust cloud down them crossroads
---Anonymous
passed tobbacco fields whisper promises of endentured poverty
---Anonymous
family blood poured upon this fertile palmetto soil
---Anonymous
courage -cowardous-pragmatic survivalism-metaphsical inspiration
---Anonymous
fatback with beans in a tin roof shack hotter than hell on a sunday
---Anonymous
rain poured from the gourds of angels beating down like a drum
---Anonymous
plow the love to seed our passionate fruit of tomorrow
---Anonymous
In the sunshine of tomorrow forget not the bittersweet taste of yesterday
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Poem Number 404
Oh crustacean unfortunate
---Anonymous
Enthroned on my Blue Willow plate
---BR
What wonders of the deep couldst thou unfold
---Anonymous
Had not thy boiling come...alas, too late!
---BR
And, what clould have been our salvation
---BR
Becomes, again, nothing but a seafood dinner!
---BR
Oh! killer of the prophets and slayer of those sent forth unto us!
---BR

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Poem Number 405
Dashbot scurries down the hall
---Anonymous
and into a wall
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