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Poem Number 392
I wish I felt better about the future


Commentary:
feel better about now and the future will take care of itself
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platitudes
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if you won't change now, there is no future - nothing "platitudey" about that - my fear of the future is that it will be exactly like now, and yes it sucks and it's not easy to change "now" but - there's no other time available to work with...
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i understand that - i'm talking about global things I can't change in a big enough way (i.e. positively impact) to avert, like say:
- global warming
- international terrorism
- global liquidity crisis
- etc
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i constantly work upon myself :) that's not the issue.
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oh
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lol. you could work on being less pedantic ;)
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your tutelage would be greatly appreciated in manner of edication
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your tutelage would be greatly appreciated in ALL manner of edification
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i'm also a hot copy editor and proof reader :) lol
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braille?
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that's a specialty i don't possess ;) how about you?
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