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Poem Number 375
nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
the magic i give you gets cast aside
i work each day to try and take it in stride
that sooner or later the enchantment will subside
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honestly! men!!
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i spent an hour waiting for you :(
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enjoy your game playing lonely person. the result is you will remain alone.
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how strangely exotic it would be
if you were a boy pretending to be a she
and i were a girl wrongly attributed as a he
would that give more cred to my poetry?
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