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Poem Number 367
so confused by how my heart wants you
don't let me hold you back from the life you seek


Commentary:
how could you?
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you may be a part of it...
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hold you back from living the life you choose? you are a free agent.
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you must definitely be a part of it, or who would i be talking to?
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a part of your life?
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i'd like to believe that. we never talk beyond these pages, why is that?
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where could that happen?
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on skype
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too dimensional - reality may be too hard to land on :(
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then.. this is our world?
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unless we exist at the same lat. long. why would this world not suit?
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i want to be touched
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it seems you are significantly north of my lat/long
if i'm mistaken - what dreams may come...
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ah.. i see.

then let us carry on?
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too cagey to confirm?
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i don't know where you live. tell me.
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so cal
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vancouver
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confirmed - besides my dear - in real time -
i am but an unrequited, hypersensitive, been on the planet a frightfully long time - poetress - dreaming large - and too scared to show up at the dance.
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;) lol. i like you!
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you're alright too
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come play :D
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grow where you are planted :)
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ditto
:)
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thanks - read ya later
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g'nite
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