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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Four


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Poem Number 361
it is not true
you can never fool me again
i was fooling myself
and did not value me and could not tell you
a wrote a pretty story that could not be sustained
i really wanted to know you
but could only borrow your name
WHATEVER


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