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Poem Number 354
the day we met
you must have
thought
your own
personal
circus
came to town
strait-jackets
should have been
the main act
of the day
Time stopped when I saw you
did u know the seconds held their breath
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Jeez man, you think this is AOL or something? Write something original, something that fits with the poem you're attaching it to, and something that doesn't smell like illiteracy. --eritain, who *knows* he is being 'judgemental', thank you very much
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I agree. In fact, I avoid this salon because it makes me gag. Sorry.
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