Where's a star when you need a wish?
behind the darkness of a frown
look around...

According to "st", the moon was going through a phase and the stars had to take cover for a while...BR
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in this city they are no stars that shine bright
just the flashes and blurs of the big city lights
ellucidating the miserable streets
that eat the souls of the wretched and rich
and without thought
levae them in a flooded ditch
No smile on my face
not for the place I am.
New York City...
the city of dreams,hopes, aspirations
the city of death, drugs, and aggrivations.
The city that devoured my soul,
yep the city ate it whole,
and destroyed my many loves.
This city has millions of stars,
Just none to make a wish upon...
So I hide behind this frown.
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I'd really like so commentary...even if they suck. Please let me know what I could do to be a better poet. I'm in need of help.