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Poem Number 318
when i have fallen
and the times are bleek.
should i lay abot and weep?
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Hell, no, call 911.
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Hell, no, call 911.
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No way. Come over to High Critique Solo #5 and Wonk. It will make you feel better. *Wonka*
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