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Poem Number 317
worthless
yet unchanged by the reality of my ways
perhaps a night in cold solemn bliss
perhaps i might find the a way
if climb to a quit place and evaluate
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this is really worthless if only i could learn to type


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Worthless
yet unchanged by the reality of my ways
perhaps a night in cold solemn bliss
perhaps i might find a way
if i climb to a quiet place and evaluate
just maybe i will see the light
just maybe i will find the way

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