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Poem Number 408
Blindingly fat
---Anonymous
Perceptually thin
---Anonymous
Intriguingly wide
---Anonymous
A Cheshire grin
---Anonymous
with whims for the hims,wows for the shes
---grant, plumas
and nervously shaking of knobby knees
---clova, gwynn oak md

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I like it. What a great discription of that famous smile :)
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Poem Number 409
ravish me with radishes
---Anonymous
comfort me with cucumbers
---BR
please me with parsnips
---Anonymous
tempt me with tomatoes
---Anonymous
rouse me with rutabagas
---Anonymous
give her some sausage
---Anonymous

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hubba hubba
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Poem Number 411
My name is sathish from mangalore
---sathish kumar, mangalore
We know. It's such a bore
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 413
Toby the tarantula
---Anonymous
needed a spatula
---Anonymous
to catch his dinner
---Anonymous
then he became flatulant
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 414
Jeanette
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 415
Oh the beguiling beauty and effervescent charm
---enukamee, western washington state U.S.
tempts the senses
---Anonymous

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