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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Three


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Poem Number 408
Blindingly fat
Perceptually thin
Intriguingly wide
A Cheshire grin
with whims for the hims,wows for the shes
and nervously shaking of knobby knees

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I like it. What a great discription of that famous smile :)
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Poem Number 409
ravish me with radishes
comfort me with cucumbers
please me with parsnips
tempt me with tomatoes
rouse me with rutabagas
give her some sausage

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hubba hubba
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Poem Number 411
My name is sathish from mangalore
We know. It's such a bore

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Poem Number 413
Toby the tarantula
needed a spatula
to catch his dinner
then he became flatulant

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Poem Number 414
Jeanette

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Poem Number 415
Oh the beguiling beauty and effervescent charm
tempts the senses

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