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Poem Number 394
the absence of your melodious voice
is darker than a starless night
softer than the deepest velvet
brushed against the cheek
we fall to our knees weak...
wishing again to talk not just speak
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to be punish properly
it is necessary to completely shun the other
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the penance must have been paid by now, right?
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