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Poem Number 385
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YMCA cot
homeless? laptop? :)
poverty isn't what it used to be!
it pays to be wireless i see
with a constant connection
from see to sea - between you and me
aliens trying to read my mind
aluminum hats for everyone, stat
no need to be a cosmic doormat!
or grow thin while Jabba gets fat
it's a cookbook ! don't leave!
"vacation" is what the aliens want you to believe
it's not really Cancun or the month of June, things are NOT as they SEEM
just dessert - get out the whipped cream
prepare to scream! as Jabba licks you clean ;)


Commentary:
i got my new mac laptop today!!!
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rotf
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I hate to see Princess Leia in chains :(
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! ;b
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