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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Three


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Poem Number 381
patty cake patty cake
it better be chocolate!
and keep your hands off it ;)
to avoid any strife
i'll eat it right off the knife
but - i get to lick the spoon
and clean the bowl with gooey fingers!
you my friend get to wash the dishes ;)
To keep the piece (of fudge) I offer to put them away.


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