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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Three
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Poem Number 377
flip the 2 pp's upside down and VOILA! b's
Commentary:
there are cycles when i don't get poetry
standing off to a side as commentators flock screeching like seagulls
regurgitating lines: OH! This poem is so FINE! So fine!
Me... pebble plunked into a dark pond, ripples as pebble silently resurfaces
out of control alliteration, re gurgitation of agitation of....
Plantertables covered in coy rhymes under green house roofs
that really aren't green. So the rub, when one requests a backscratch.
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