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Poem Number 367
I need to master razzmatazz and shizzle
Not elocute standing in a drizzle
Wailing as the trumpet shrieks
Hanging wit some poetry geeks
beware of standing in a puddle
caught up in a poetry muddle
while practicing your elocution
you'll be subject to electrocution


Commentary:
shrieks! i'm a freak not just a geek
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Eeeeeekkk!!!
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*poof*
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electrostatically clean!
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Sterile poetry. No costly or caustic substances required ;)
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that's what happen's when god's "procreative juices" get frozen!
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A Godsicle?

ROTFLOL !!!
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