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Poem Number 365
Begin anew... said the gnu
a low blow - to be compared to a water buffalo
tho' if you can employ again a "doth"
i will be able to forgive you both
Horned ungulates doth have a place
Proscribed by a god of time and space
a god who's trapped in such confines
may occasionally fgo out of his mind
and off to the ice cream stand He trundles
slurrrp!
to buy fudgicles by the bundle :) YUM
Hark! I hear the melodious sounds of a Dixie Truck
brain freeze explains the ungulates
too many popsicles and the creator procrastinates
His procreative juices froze up like an igloo!
So, what does he do? He makes the Gnu : )
Trust me, it's true!
so i guess he created you too :b
as part of the human zoo @};-
Commentary:
"bathe" lol! luv it :)
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;)
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LOL
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oh mang, i suck.. lol
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lol - stop, please! - no really - *stop* ;b
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lol - stop, please! - no really - *stop* ;b
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it's THAT bad??? rofl
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*choochie choochie coo!*
*tickles the rib cage*
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it's THAT bad!!! rofl
;b
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LOL LOL LOL LOL
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well... um.. it's not that bad, really...lol
i mean, i've written worse and you my friend... well .... LOL
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It is pretty bad :)
lol!
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Well, there's nothing to it, but for you to start another poem :D
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@};- this poem is now laid to rest.
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