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Poem Number 364
slash and burn's
a hard way to learn
instead employ gentler ways
voraciousness must learn that patiences pays
when seeds are sown
deep into the unknown
sit back, give them time to stew
and to marinate within the cosmic brew
as intoxicating as the comsos may be
I just needed time to see
at the depths intoned,
are we looking for a dog's buried bone
or a rare & precious stone?
While each atom along the path doth have its place
Love alone shines with brightest face :)
Yet, that truth aside, one finally must decide...
If the tyme allowed was worth the find
love is a powerful incantation
it is not well to banty it about...
i hope you enjoy this incarnation
and i guess we will meet when you fall out :)
Commentary:
Are you referring to the pome that was here? i thought it was time to try new poetries. didn't mean to offend if that is the case :) ~hugs~
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more a hint at inner dialog (yes - i talk to myself...)
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i like it :)
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i think most people talk to themself. Some out loud. I see it a lot around town and of course in the privacy of the home we all might be blabber mouths...lol
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your turn ~
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lol
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love is rare
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Sorry about the silly sequey into "love". I like where you are taking the poem.
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"Fall out" - what does that mean? tx
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i figure ya must be in love...
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maybe we ought to start a new poem...
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nah, enticing curiosity :) let's start a new poem!
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