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Poem Number 352
trust
is a must between us
said the fox to the hen
She took out a pen
To confirm what shen heard
"Sign here, with your blood, I want more than a word",
i'll sign with this truth - yuo must trust that it's so
i mean you no harm but i can't seem to let go
of the idea that you're special, and i don't know why
it drives me crazy that you're not just an ordinary guy
so if i knew you better, i am hoping to see
what piece of the puzzle we might find and agree
that the benefit would be, both for you and for me


Commentary:
That's right - you can't swan around and be in a flap at the same time. One must choose :)
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i've always preferred a warden - to keeping myself prisoner...
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You like to be controlled? Prision may be the place for you or the army?
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children, play nice
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He started it!
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i didn't mean to close this early. sorry. BB devices suck.
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