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Poem Number 326
madness claims
harshness drains
guiltless blames
all pays the same
in plaintive missions to a pain
forever bound here by my own chains
i've found this insane brain remains
My skeletal form dances to the strains
Of something else insane
lurking somewhere inside this place i call my domain
trapped here my soul awaiting to be slain
In this darkness... i feel so inane


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