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Poem Number 323
Finally
I walk away from the tears that
All the people made me cry.
Finally
I can ignore all the laughing and teasing
They used to do.
Lastly
All that remains is hilarity and muse
Commentary:
I hate to be the one to tell you , Jocelyn, all that laughter wasn't about you. And they didn't all start discussing you the moment you walked out the door. That's a complex some people have and it makes them very unhappy.
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I walk away from the tears that
All the people made me cry.
reread that line. there's some powerful emotion and u could almost stop it there....but that line....
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I walk away from the tears that
All the people made me cry.
reread that line. there's some powerful emotion and u could almost stop it there....but that line....
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I walk away from the tears that
All the people made me cry.
reread that line. there's some powerful emotion and u could almost stop it there....but that line....
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