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Poem Number 310
SWEET BLACK



Commentary:
Coffee – yes, nothing else to live for but this sweet black sex

So I said, “I want a divorce” and he could keep the pasta maker
Hey, an ape can remember and extrapolate experience so what about him?

Coffee – yes, nothing else to live for but this sweet black sex
Four shots in three minutes, are you in?
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oh yeah
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