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Poem Number 406
With this mind
a home was built
and in its rooms
the world evolves
but never is the problem solved
Lost in the waves of time, the house burned its soul.
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It is very good, especially the last line.
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bravo to the guy who done the last line.
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which one BUT THE PROBLEM IS NEVER SOLVED or the other one
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the last line was written 50 years ago by a child
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whose line is it anyway?
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Poem Number 407
While trying to find what you want I lost me...
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