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Poem Number 391
I couldn't
bring myself
to eat
the sandwich
because it
contained what
I didn't
want and
represented what
I didn't
NEED
Commentary:
Interesting...makes me ask myself if it was a shit sandwich or a metaphor for an eating disorder...
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i vote for the shit sandwich
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How about like this----
I couldn't bring myself to eat
the sandwich on the street
the smell was too intense, they'ed say
inforced by what I need
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i couldn't eat the sandwich
not even a little bit
i couldn't eat the sandwich
because it was made of shit
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