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Poem Number 1536
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Poets where are you?
no place to be found.
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I was gone for awhile and I've come back to see that I have my on private space to once again colonize. Thank you thank you to no one in particular. I have to get ready for work now...I'll be back later...Poetry Freak.
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hi
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hi
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hi nakedowl
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hi nakedowl its roy
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Hey people, long time no see.
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hey how r u
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hey hey
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Poem Number 1538
tickets for 1 please
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I go alone through the world
A sparrow among the trees
The only thing that bothers me
Is when I ask ticket for 1 please
When I fly I drink alone
Such a cruel joke when
I look at my phone
I reach out with timid hands
And touch the breeze
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