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Poem Number 9584
........Telltale ... Signs.....
It just feels that way
when I drive to you,
my four tires go flat;
when I do arrive,
and then climb your stairs,
I slip on slick spot;
might as well break leg.
At the door, I knock;
you do not answer.
Alas, when I'm in,
you are on the phone
--chat to all, but me!
Why can't I admit,
you've quit loving me?!
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(End of Affair?)
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Commentary:
Maybe the other party involved is just testing your patience...lol Remember that old country song:
I don't think she's in love anymore
She's pulled down the shades
And changed the lock on the door..
Or something like that...
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~~~NR
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just goes to show, love is blind, as they say.....ms.
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NR, thanks for the cute song--a consolation prize. ms, you're so right. Technologically, I can't figure out, why almost everyone, one time or another, feels he/she desperately needs to "have" a certain person, to "survive!". == Ben
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Maybe it's because of Love Ben? ~TJ
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