And we walked to the middle of the dance floor,
and you were gone.
and the sun rose over the river,
And I was cold and tired.
And last summer we were lovers,
And the cold of winter has come between us now,
And everything I every want, I lose.

thats a niffty poem!!! take that as a big compliment cuz i am pretty critical. some day some one special will come along...even if the poem is not about you. but its better to write about your own experiences. i know what thats like...line 7(the last) i've lost a lot of loved ones in my life.
starry blue

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Line 7 rings so true...
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The last line needs to be corrected. The word every needs to be changed to ever. I athink that it was probably a typo error.
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if you wrote it, then it should apply to you, unless it was an
error. hope for the best. somehow, it all comes together.
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Winter is only a season,-- Love , the eternity by which all are brought together. Why fret then?