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Poem Number 8952
Questing, Searching~
---Anonymous
*By Fapral, True Knight, dm, and others
---Anonymous
~
---Anonymous
The path to misic is cloudy, yet clear
---Fapral
How can you not find it,
---Anonymous
The beat of your heart, or in the time of your step?
---Anonymous
In the quest for a melody, a group of souls go searching.
---Fapral
~
---Anonymous
He sits on death row, comdemned to die,
---Anonymous
Playing tag with his thoughts, never knowing "who's it."
---Anonymous
As his brain records the chase, it sounds in his ears.
---Anonymous
Does he ever hear the world's normal rythmn, or the beat of a normal soul?
---Anonymous
~
---Anonymous
The answer is not a hero, but a hunter
---Fapral
He kills only when he must, a tear in his heart.
---Anonymous
Always with reverence, with honor,
---Anonymous
The wolf pricks his ears. Is someone coming?
---Fapral
~
---Anonymous
From behind a tree comes a poet
---Fapral
Without means enough to express her heart
---Anonymous
Picking up a pen, words fall short of the river
---Anonymous
Can she find the means in the music of a song?
---Fapral
~
---Anonymous
The means are in a Trabador, A musician of many talents.
---True Knight
His lyrics come from the world around him, a world of many faces
---True knight
But, the words are lost, as is the rythmns he seeks
---True knight
Will he find either again?
---True knight
~
---Anonymous
Hiding among the stars, she's called only wife and mother
---Anonymous
Her identity is stifled, feeding theirs
---Anonymous
Her archaic occupation, riduculed and fuel for jokes
---Anonymous
Does the melody of her love sing stronger than the jokes?
---Anonymous
~
---Anonymous
Oh wonderous Child, full of innocence and light
---dm
Condemned to die before your birth, join the quest.
---dm
Though the heart is stilled, Your soul can walk.
---dm
Hand in hand with those who appreciate the "Circle of Life."
---dm
~
---Anonymous
Mad man, hunter, poet, musician, sorceress, and child angel
---Anonymous
We need to share your steps as on your quest you go.
---Anonymous
As we understand your music, so we know the answers.
---Anonymous
Listen to each other, as each has melody, rythmn, and harmony.
---Anonymous
Commentary:
as one of the "other" who contributed to this, why ask for our words when you change them to suit yourself, you changed several stanzas---so credit yourself
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My apoligies. All I was trying to do, was sew in a couple more pieces. Fapral
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sorry too, my girlfriend and i got in a major fight today and i am in a nasty mood-tired of being misunderstood-vented on you-was wrong
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that's ok. Did you like it?
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yes i do-hard to imagine a world in harmony-would be an astonishing place to live-i'd settle for harmony with one certain person at this place in time-got a good song?
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A certain ugly footstep shows up in every elegant scene of beauty. May the angels of mercy keep up us several steps ahead of that ugly footstep. = Caramba
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....... I can hear the heart beat of the universe, as the song that we sing goes out and comes back to us a thousandfold more wonderfull, full of power, full of God... Thankyou for your poem...
The one you need to find harmony with is yourself, then you shall be at peace with all souls...
A little too esoteric... Rainbow
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