near her treehouse
where I buried the robin-
grow pink shamrocks

its true...they sprouted up just near the woodpile !!
;)annie
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line 2= where the robin is buried ;)annie
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Thanks for touching us with the wonder of it, more so because it is truth. "Sadness"
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annie- what a lovely sign. Pink Shamrocks? Never heard of them before. Lovely, lovely. Jane
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near the heart
where i buried my love
pink soul flowers
-- allan (inspired by your fine haiku annie)
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lovely...allan..very lovely.......;)annie
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Allan, I think your haiku would be stronger if annie would let you borrow her "pink shamrocks". Each 'petal' of a shamrock is a perfect heart. There is also hidden meaning in "sham - rocks" which resonates nicely. Good work, and as you see, you drew me in with it
1 \o/ jr
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jr - yes, i see that - and i agree. quite strong associations hiding in those petals. Good points jr - allan